調查報告類作文訓練 課件

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調查報告要根據具體調查內容來寫。調查報告的寫作思路(3段法)

1、報告是關于什么的?

Recentlywedidasurveyabout….Here’stheresultofoursurvey.2、報告的內容：（數據/觀點）A陳述觀點+所基于的原因B陳述現狀+所造成的結果3、作者的觀點：inmyopinion;inaword;Ithink/hope/believethat….Thereisnodoubtthat….Summary比例喜歡的英語老師類型40%有創意(creative),授課生動,有趣28%年輕、友善且有幽默感(humorous)20%關心學生，平等對待學生7%細心、耐心，樂于幫助學生5%工作勤奮你的看法？寫作自評表自評項目評價結果是 否1.我明白在寫作中“我”是誰2.我非常清楚寫作要點3.我的書寫很工整，字沒有超出規定的范圍，標點符號清晰4.我一開始就確定文章的時態5.我每段的第一、第二句就寫出了段落的主要內容，然后展開（段落中心句）6.寫作時，我盡可能運用連接詞7.寫作時，我總是嘗試運用多種表達方式，避免句式的單一8.寫前我盡可能構思完整，盡量避免邊寫邊涂改9.寫完后，我能細心地檢查文章一遍，檢查內容要點是否有遺漏，詞匯、時態、句法是否正確10.需要修改時，我一筆劃過，確保修改清楚工整【解題思路】1.時態：_______________________________________

內容要點：_______________________________________2.詞句準備：1）40%的學生_______________________________喜歡_______________________________________40%的學生喜歡有創意，授課生動、有趣的老師。_______________________________________________________________________________2）在我看來_______________________________________like/prefer/befondof/love/carefor六個內容要點40%students/40%ofthestudents以一般現在時為主40%studentspreferteacherswhoarecreativeandinteresting,andwhocangivelivelylessons.inmyopinion,asfarasIamconcerned,IbelieveRecentlywedidasurveyaboutthetypeofteachersthatstudentslikebest.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Recentlywedidasurveyaboutthetypeofteachersthatstudentslikebest.

40%ofthestudentswouldprefercreativeEnglishteacherswhocanmaketheirEnglishclasseslivelyandinteresting.28%thinkthattheyoung,kindandhumourousEnglishteachersarepopularwithstudents.And20%ofthestudentsbelievethatgoodEnglishteachersshouldcareaboutstudents’feelingsandtreateverystudentequally.7%ofthestudents

liketheEnglishteacherswhoarecareful,patientandready