Unit 5 寫作訓練學案

關于詩歌的寫作寫作題目假設你是李華,你的加拿大筆友Peter正在學習唐詩,發來一首唐代詩人李紳的名作《憫農》(SympathyforFarmers)(鋤禾日當午,汗滴禾下土。誰知盤中餐,粒粒皆辛苦。)向你請教,請你用英語給他寫一封回信,內容包括:1.解釋詩歌的意思;2.闡述你的感受。注意:1.請不要逐句翻譯;2.詞數80左右,開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數;3.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletterinwhichyouaskedmeaboutaTangpoem—SympathyforFarmers.

Yours,LiHua

思路點撥主題對唐詩《憫農》的理解及感受體裁應用文人稱以第三人稱為主時態一般現在時布局第一段:引入正文;第二段:解釋詩歌的意思;第三段:闡述感受。遣詞造句Ⅰ.用本單元所學單詞或短語填空1.adj.民間的;普通百姓的

2.adj.愛好文學的;文學的

3.vt.背誦;吟誦

4.由……組成

答案1.folk2.literary3.recite4.bemadeupofⅡ.本單元語塊、語法運用1.完成句子(1)這首詩由4個詩行組成,不難吟誦。Thispoemfourlines.Itisnotdifficult.

(2)夏日正午時刻,雖然外面天氣炎熱,但農民依然在田間勞作。outsideatnooninsummer,thefarmersarestillworkinginthefields.

(3)他們全身濕透,汗水落入莊稼生長的土地里。(where引導的定語從句)Theyarewetthroughandtheirsweatisfallingintothesoil,.

(4)我認為對于年輕人來說,理解這首詩并珍惜每一粒糧食是很重要的。(itis+adj.+forsb.todosth.)Ithinktheyoungthepoemandtreasureeverygrain.

答案(1)ismadeupof;torecite(2)Althoughitishot(3)wherethecropsgrow(4)itisveryimportantfor;tounderstand2.句式升級(5)用定語從句將句(1)合并為一個句子Thispoemfourlinesisnotdifficulttorecite.

(6)用as引導的讓步狀語從句改寫句(2)(倒裝句)outsideatnooninsummer,thefarmersarestillworkinginthefields.

(7)用with的復合結構改寫句(3)Theyarewetthroughintothesoil,wherethecropsgrow.

(8)用“itisof+抽象名詞”結構改寫句(4)Ithinkfortheyoungtounderstandthepoemandtreasureeverygrain.

答案(5)thatismadeupof(6)Hotasitis(7)withtheirsweatfalling(8)itisofgreatimportance連句成篇

參考范文DearPeter,

I'mgladtoreceiveyourletterinwhichyouaskedmeaboutaTangpoem—SympathyforFarmers.ThepoembyLiShenispopularwithfolkliteraryreaders.

Thispoemthatismadeupoffourlinesisnotdifficulttorecite.Ithasvividpictures:Hotasitisoutsideatnooninsummer,thefarmersarestillworkinginthefields.Theyarewetthroughwiththeirsweatfallingintothesoil,wherethecropsgrow.Butwhoknowsallthedeliciousdishesonourtablecomefromthehardworkoffarmers?Thepoemremindspeopleofthefarmers'hardwork.Ithinkitisofgreatimportancefortheyoungtounderstandthepoemandtreasureeverygrain.Yours,LiHua

寫作積累常用短語1.bepopularwith受……歡迎2.attheendofeachline在每一行末尾3.bedescribedvividly被生動地描述4.specialwritingskills特別的寫作技巧5.graspthespiritofthepoem領會這首詩的精髓實戰演練()假如你是紅星中學高二學生李華,你的英國朋友Jim在給你寫的郵件中提到他對中國文化感興趣,因此你推薦他觀看《中國詩詞大會》(TheChinesePoetryCompetition)這檔電視節目。請你給Jim回一封電子郵件,內容包括:1.介紹該節目的播出時間和電視頻道(每周五晚8:00,CCTV-10);2.簡單介紹中國詩詞;3.說明推薦的理由。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。DearJim,

Yours,LiHua

答案全解全析實戰演練Onepossibleversion:DearJim,

I'mverygladtohearyou'reinterestedinChineseculture.I'dliketorecommendTheChinesePoetryCompetitiontoyou.ItisaTVprogrambroadcastonCCTV-10at8:00everyFridaynight.Asweallknow,Chinesepoetryhasalonghistory.Mostpoemsrhymeattheendofthelines,